EDUCATING PROSPECTS
Project: Marketing
Client: PCPS MaxHelp! Boonton, NJ
Designed Elements: Google Business Profile, social media ads, and tagline
Original:
436/750 characters, 18 sec reading time.
Pcps / MaxHELP! is an independent Computer Service Provider in New Jersey helping people with the Apple Macintosh repair and PC computing needs. We offer hardware upgrades, refurbished computer sales, support and service for all makes and models as well. We have been in business since 1992 and do onsite service & consulting as well. Why go to a "Genius" when you can talk to the real experts who you do not need an appointment to see?
436/750 characters, 18 sec reading time.
Pcps / MaxHELP! is an independent Computer Service Provider in New Jersey helping people with the Apple Macintosh repair and PC computing needs. We offer hardware upgrades, refurbished computer sales, support and service for all makes and models as well. We have been in business since 1992 and do onsite service & consulting as well. Why go to a "Genius" when you can talk to the real experts who you do not need an appointment to see?
Rewrite:
750/750 characters, 25 sec reading time. Improved grammar. Clear, organized, friendly, engaging, and informative.
Based in Boonton, NJ, PCPS MaxHelp! is an Independent Computer Service Provider, IT Consultancy, and a Seller of Refurbished Computers.
750/750 characters, 25 sec reading time. Improved grammar. Clear, organized, friendly, engaging, and informative.
Based in Boonton, NJ, PCPS MaxHelp! is an Independent Computer Service Provider, IT Consultancy, and a Seller of Refurbished Computers.
The shop, whose landmark is a BIG red apple in its window, is staffed with friendly, strait-talking Apple Certified Technicians.
Since 1992, MaxHelp! has provided Apple Macintosh and PC computing services for all makes and models through onsite consulting, remote sessions, and within the shop.
MaxHelp!'s clients come from word of mouth. The technologically challenged, the everyday user, small–midsize organizations, corporate establishments, and fortune 500 corporations are all from referrals of existing customers.
Why an appointment with a "Genius" when there's prompt help from true experts? PCPS MaxHelp!
